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New Book Announced


BEWilhelm.com
May 1, 2009

From the author that brought you "Murder Makes the Rounds" comes the all new "Double Helix: DNA Never Lies." The book is due to hit store shelves this August.

More information will be posted as the release date comes closer.

In the meantime, you can read the synopsis of Double Helix under the "Books" section, or by clicking here.

Check back often. You won't want to pass this book up!







Writing a Medical Thriller

Writers News Weekly
Week of April 6 - April 12, 2008

From the author: The challenge of writing a medical thriller is twofold: One has to have a full command of the skills and process of writing a good novel and at the same time incorporate technical knowledge into key aspects of the story. These elements need to be woven in seamlessly, lest the finished book read like a text. At the same time, the book must obey the basic rules of a good novel: tight plot, something to hook the reader from the beginning, and compelling characters.

One of the first plotting decisions is to select the premise—that piece of science that will provide the rationale for the central concept. It is not a coincidence that many of the best medical thrillers are written by medical professionals, often involving aspects of their own specialty. Writers are most comfortable writing about what they know. The possibilities are without limit, and in this day of bio-terrorism, even old diseases such as smallpox and plague have gained renewed interest. But beware of frequently-employed devices, unless you can think of a new, and fiendishly clever, twist.

One common method for presenting the factual material is to set up one of the characters as an expert. That character can, by actions and dialogue, explain the key points in terms that can be understood by another character that is not an expert, but a reasonably intelligent layperson. This device provides a clear, succinct presentation of the science and lets the dialogue drive the story.

In a great thriller, the reader feels a sense of unease. It could happen to them, if they were in similar circumstances, but they are really sold because they care about what happens to the key characters. The author must create strong attachments to those that are put in jeopardy. If characters are introduced and then killed off or threatened before the reader forms a bond with them, the reader won’t care what happens, no matter how clever the premise is. And while the author may need to sacrifice one or more characters, I advise keeping the extent of the calamity short of apocalyptic. Readers have a harder time getting emotionally involved if the story wipes out the planet than if the evil is up close and personal, striking at one or more now-beloved characters. Witness the success of television soap operas.

Another good rule is to keep some small thread of hope throughout the story, without allowing a quick resolution to the problem. Consider offering a series of situations that seem to present a solution, then have one of the characters tear it down. This gives the reader points of relief, yet builds the suspense by following each disappointment with an even more awful set of circumstances.

In summary, a medical thriller starts with the basics of a good novel and uses scientific or technical material as an integral element of the story. The science is important, but it is not a substitute for good, basic writing.

Article © Barbara Wilhelm 2008.






Smithfield Reading Circle makes the rounds with Barbara Wilhelm

Georges Gazette
Week of October 11 - October 17, 2007

    The Smithfield Reading Circle meets the last Wednesday of each month in the Smithfield Library, usually to discuss a current novel.  This month was a special treat.  Mela Barrows Bennett who wrote “Murder Makes The Rounds,” came to the meeting to take questions about her novel and provide insight into the writing process.
    The author says, “If you ever had a problem with ‘managed care,’ you’ll love this book.”
    In actuality, Mela Barrows Bennett is a pseudonym for Uniontown native, Dr. Barbara Wilhelm.  She is a practicing physician and has served as president of the Fayette County Medical Society and the Highlands Hospital Medical Staff.
    The Reading Circle’s president, Marilyn Miller introduced Dr. Wilhelm and thanked her for appearing. Miller then introduced a visiting dignitary, Smithfield Mayor Charles Cieszynski Jr.  The Mayor took the opportunity to thank Dr. Wilhelm on behalf of Smithfield, its library and the Fayette County Library System (FCLS).  During his speech, the mayor presented a synopsis of Murder Makes The Rounds.
    He said it is a “fascinating murder mystery love story centered around two doctors involved in trying to clean up all the dirty little secrets in the web of deceit in regards to hospital politics and ruthless ambition.”
    He presented Dr. Wilhelm with several items from Smithfield’s Centra Bank.
    Dr. Wilhelm said she is more used to talking about medical things than talking about writing.
    When asked about her pen-name, Wilhelm said that Mela Barrows Bennett was her great-grandmother and she always thought her name was “cool.”
    Wilhelm said that “Murder Makes The Rounds” was not the first novel that she had ever written, however, it is the first that was published.  She always liked to write, but never wrote a whole book until about eight years ago.  She had been working on a medieval novel, but said she had to get away from it because she started “forsoothing” herself and wanted to get a little more contemporary and began writing “Murder Makes The Rounds.”
    Reading inspires many people to write, she observed.  She commented that when you read a novel, you might actually say to yourself, “I’d have written it a little differently.”
    A question frequently put to her is what doesn’t the public understand about managed care.  She laughed and said, “ We don’t understand, because it changes every week.”
    She loves to write, especially when something in the office is frustrating.  Writing provides a release.  She is the type who does better, “with several balls in the air” rather than concentrating on one thing at a time.
    It was her experience at Highlands a few years ago when she was medical staff president that provided much of the background inspiration for her novel.  She said she “got to see the inner working when the hospitals got together.”
    She brought laughter to the group when she assured them, that unlike her novel, in her experience the patients did not die.  She plans a sequel but explained that even though a book is written, the publishing sequence may tale a year or more, even if you are an established writer.
    The Reading Circle thoroughly enjoyed their question and answer session.  Prior to the lunch, Miller presented Wilhelm with a special basket of local goods, crafts and momentos from 12 local communities.  Smithfield provided a Backgaard (Mark Twain)  paperweight from Rich Farms, Point Marion sent a Washington Novelty Painted Glass Dish from the Houze Glass Corporation.  Friendship Hill sent note cards.  Curves for Women in Fairchance contributed a “Circle of Friends” mouse pad, a ug and a tin of sugar free peppermints.
    The other cities sending gifts were: Brownsville, Chalk Hill, Dawson, Dunbar, Masontown, McClellandtown, Perryopolis, Republic and Uniontown.
    And from the Fayette County Library System Reading Circle members came the following: Gerri Heft – towel and bookmarks; Jean Kennedy – felt, sequin and embroidery dove pin and plastic canvas bunny pin; Phyllis Smith- string lace angel pin and candle wreath tree trim; Dorothy Sanner – bead and paper necklace (made from church bulletins); Marilyn Miller – FCLS Reading circle bookmark.
    Dr. Wilhelm was able to stay and autograph several copies of her book for the Reading Circle.
   
Article © Georges Gazette 2007.


 
 


Doctor draws on real life in "Murder Makes the Rounds"

Worrall Community Newspapers
August 9, 2007

     Dr. Barbara Wilhelm always expected she would be the subject of another article in the Maplewood News-Record.  She just didn't think it would take so long.  The last time she appeared in this paper, some thirty-odd years ago, she was on the front page, below the fold, pictured for being named a National Merit Scholar.  A graduate of Columbia High School, Barbara went on to Chatham College and then to the University of Pittsburgh Medical School.  However, the reason she is the subject of this article is not for her academic or professional accomplishments.  She has drawn on her experiences in Family Practice, her work on numerous hospital committees, and her term as Medical Staff President to write her first published novel, Murder Makes The Rounds.
     The former Maplewood resident has chosen to publish under the name of her great-grandmother, Mela Barrows Bennett, explaining, "I always thought she had the perfect author name.  Here you have three unusual, interesting names that sound well together.  Think of all of the great writers with three names, from Robert Louis Stevenson to Mary Higgins Clark.  The way the names roll off your tongue makes them stick in your mind."
     Murder Makes The Rounds� follows Dr. David Hunter as he becomes President of the Medical Staff at the fictional Green Valley Memorial Hospital and faces the challenge of keeping his community hospital independent despite pressures from managed care and the encroachment of the University Medical Center growing empire.  The Chief of Pathology, Dr. Janis Hunter, emerges as his unexpected ally.  As they investigate two sudden deaths among the Board of Trustees, they forge a strong friendship, and discover personal secrets that threaten their declaration of remaining happily single.
     When asked about her inspiration for the plot, Dr. Wilhelm replied, "My local hospital was having issues with remaining independent versus joining one of the growing health systems, and the long discussions among the staff, Trustees, and administration started me on the path to this story.  Certainly, we had nothing so dramatic as the events in the novel, but once a story takes hold in my head, I follow it, and see where it leads."
     As to the other occasions when her name appeared in the News-Record, she admitted that several of those were in elementary school.  "I went to Jefferson School, and during the summers, I was at the Maplewood Public Library several times a week.  They had a summer reading contest, and the student from each grade that read the most books won a prize (usually a book) and had their picture in the News-Record.  I won every year I was eligible and ran out of books to read in the children's section.  I remember having to get special permission from the librarian to check out books on Egypt and Perry Mason mysteries
from the adult side."�
     Currently in full-time practice of family medicine, Dr. Wilhelm has had extensive writing experience, including work on the newspaper in high school and as Editor-in-Chief of the paper at Chatham College. "I've always enjoyed writing," she tells this reporter.  "I've had a number of ideas for books, but until a few years ago, I had never taken the time to actually sit down and complete one.  Once I did, I wanted to do another.  Writing is a joy.  Publishing and marketing is hard work."�
     She remarked that she is often asked how long it took her to write the book.  "I tell them I spent about six months on the first version before I put it aside for a while.  Then, I went back and worked through it all again.  From start to finish, I would say it took me a year."
     The book is a tantalizing mixture of hospital politics, medical mystery, murder and romance, making it a perfect selection for that summer vacation read.  It is available on-line at Amazon.com, BarnesandNoble.com and Borders.com.  A limited number of signed copies are available through the author's website, BEWilhelm.com.  Dr. Wilhelm is busy working on a sequel, and has several other unrelated works of fiction available for publication.

Article © Worrall Community Newspapers, Inc. 2007.






From PITT MED Fall 2007 Class Notes

By The Medical Alumni Association
PITT MED Fall 2007
Fall  2007

Barbara Wilhelm (MD '79) has published a novel called Murder Makes the Rounds (Pemberton Mysteries, 2006). The story is a mystery romance at heart, but Wilhelm slips in commentary on managed care in hospitals. Writing gives Wilhelm a chance to get on a soapbox and express her preference for small, community-based practices. She used a pseudonym so her patients and colleagues at Mountain Springs Medical in Western Pennsylvania won't assume that the murderous plot describes a true story from their local hospital's thought Wilhelm chuckles over. She'll keep the alias, Mela Barrows Bennett, which was her great-grandmother's name, because she thinks it's a tremendous pen name for a murder mystery. "Besides,� "Wilhelm says, "it's a nice way to honor my family."

Section © University of Pittsburgh School of Medicine 2007.






Local author holds book signing at library

By Sara E. Brown
Masontown Telegraph
July 18, 2007

     The Friends of the Library gathered Tuesday to listen to a local author discuss the writing process, inspiration and juggling a passion with the life of a doctor.
     Under the pseudonym Mela Barrows Bennett, Dr. Barbara E. Wilhelm wrote the book Murder Makes the Rounds, published by Sterlinghouse Publisher, Inc., Pittsburgh.
     On the first floor of the library, Wilhelm answered questions and provided background on her writings and her life. Wilhelm is a full-time practicing physician who obtained her B.S. and M.D. degrees in Pittsburgh. Wilhelm completed her residency in Family Practice, and she also worked in board certification at both Family Practice and Emergency Medicine, serving eight years as Director of Emergency Medicine and terms as president of the Fayette County medical Society and the Highlands Hospital Medical Staff. Choosing a pseudonym was very important to Wilhelm. I needed a great author name, she said. Every great author has three names.
     Mela Barrows Bennett was Wilhelm’s great-grandmother’s name, and for her, she always thought it was the perfect authors name; three unusual, but comfortable, names that sound well together, she said. When writing Murder, Wilhelm played on her extensive experience in the medical field to create a murder mystery inspired by her first-hand knowledge.
     During her presentation, Wilhelm discussed the trials and tribulations of writing and the time it takes to get a final product. I would literally sit down with a pen and paper and start to write, she said. It took me eight or nine years to actually sit down to a computer and write a paragraph. I had to have something written before I could go to the keys.
     Wilhelm discussed writing as an art. She compared an outline to a skeleton that metamorphoses into a final form. I find writing itself to be very interesting, very exciting and very frustrating, she said.
     For Wilhelm, writing is a therapeutic process, something that should be done a little at a time.
     When you’re writing something, it’s always a work in progress, she said. I’m sure a lot of authors say things are never quite done. Wilhelm has written six books, and Murder by the Rounds is the first to be published. She is currently working on its sequel. She cited Patricia Cornwall, Marcia Muller and Sue Grafton as influential authors who inspired who to write.
     After her presentation, Wilhelm autographed copies of her book. the Friends of the Library and other visitors then enjoyed refreshments.

Photo and article © Masontown Telegraph 2007.






This is a most fascinating and well plotted tale written by a caring
physician.

By Midwest Book Review
Midwest Book Review
July 7, 2007

Mela Barrows Bennett is a family practice and emergency medicine physician. She has experience in administration as president of the medical staff and director of emergency medicine at major hospitals.

Dr. David Hunter decides to run for staff president of Green Valley Hospital, in part to try to block a merger being pushed by the hospital’s seedy administrator, John Michael Davenport. Part of his reason for running, other than a desire to maintain the hospital’s excellent level of service, is because Dr. George Bluestone, long-time trustee, encouraged him. But when Dr. Bluestone suddenly dies, David enlists help from a new lady friend in his life, pathologist Janis Saunders. The results of the post-mortem findings are vague and disquieting:

David paged through the reports. Normal liver tests, fair lipid profile, normal blood count, negative drug and alcohol screens... Then he saw. George’s potassium level had been 2.4 (normal 3.5 to 4.5), and could have led to an irregular heart rate by itself, but the last page was the shocker. His dig level was 3.9 (desired 0.8 to 1.8) highly toxic and particularly so in light of the low potassium. This deadly combination would be recognizable to a medical student. Meds?

When a professional takes to mystery writing, it is sure to produce a highly entertaining and detailed story. It also turns out that Dr. Bennett is quite the romantic, so MURDER MAKES THE ROUNDS is liberally sprinkled with the emerging love story between David Hunter and Joyce Saunders. The docs are the good guys in this plot, and the nefarious background antics of the hospital’s administrator to enrich himself and threaten the future make this story all too familiar in today’s health care climate.

MURDER MAKES THE ROUNDS is a well-plotted whodunit filled with believable characters just trying to get by in the frantic-paced world of health care. The all-encompassing world of medicine is well portrayed, as the doctors involved try to carve out a normal life for themselves. This is a most fascinating and well plotted tale written by a caring physician. Great job!

Review © Midwest Book Review 2007.






Murders, factual and fictional:
Hospital politics may prove deadly

By Jo-Ann Greene
Lancaster Sunday News
June 10, 2007

LANCASTER COUNTY, Pa - As a physician, former Lancaster resident Barbara E. Wilhelm deals with matters of life and death routinely. As a writer, she prefers to deal with death  in the form of the murder mystery.

The former McCaskey High School student has written "Murder Makes the Rounds" under the pen name Mela Barrows Bennett, actually the name of her great-grandmother, she notes. The 203-page paperback was just published  by Pemberton Mysteries at $12.95.

Wilhelm, now of Farmington, Pa.,  sets her story in a community hospital in New York State. There a young medical staff president is trying desperately to stop the career-minded CEO from selling out their facility to a large university medical center that may just want to eliminate the competition to enhance its own bottom line.

The determined doctor thinks he has rallied enough votes on the board, when suddenly board members he's counting on start to drop dead. The cause is clearly something more than the deadly dull meetings they're forced to attend.

Who might be behind the deaths isn't the mystery; how the culprit managed to make them appear natural is the question.

With the help of the hospital pathologist, a strangely attractive woman whom most have pegged as a lesbian, the truth is revealed.

The story is as much a romance as a murder mystery, as the two lonely doctors reveal not only a killer but their killer sex drives in some steamy scenes that resolve into a happy ending.

The book's cover notes that Wilhelm, daughter of John and Martha Wilhelm, is a full-time practicing physician, board-certified in family practice and emergency medicine. She has served as director of emergency medicine as well as president of hospital medical staffs.

So she clearly knows her way around not only hospitals but hospital board rooms.

The book is a bit slow-moving in the beginning, as the trustees meet and discuss diagnostic-related groupings and other health-care finance issues.

It picks up midway, though, when the docs start studying anatomy together.

Photo and article © Lancaster Newspapers 2007.







Highlands physician pens medical thriller


By Judy Kroeger
Tribune-Review
Sunday, February 18, 2007

Dr. Barbara Wilhelm leads a double life. In addition to practicing family medicine, she writes novels.

Her first publication, "Murder Makes the Rounds," while purely fictional, draws on her real-life experiences as a physician.

She published the novel under a pseudonym, Mela Barrows Bennett, the name of her maternal great-grandmother.

"She has a great author name," Wilhelm said. "People around here might think the book is about me, and it's not. People in California who read the book won't know who I am anyway. I just like the name."

The novel focuses on two physicians, Dr. David Hunter, staff president at Green Valley Memorial Hospital in Green Valley, N.Y., and Dr. Janis Saunders, chief of pathology. The two comfortable singles form an unexpected partnership when Hunter seeks to keep the community hospital from being absorbed by University Medical Center. Hospital trustees start dropping dead in the boardroom and Saunders becomes involved, not only as a pathologist, but also as a sleuth.

This may be Wilhelm's first mystery, but she combines all the classic, successful elements: suspense, romance, humor and lead characters realistic enough to tempt the reader to call them for a consult. Wilhelm also sews the contemporary battle of managed care and hospital mergers seamlessly into the fast-paced plot.

"I've always been interested in writing," Wilhelm said. She started writing fiction in high school and continued while an undergraduate at Chatham College, where she also wrote for the school newspaper. She graduated from the University of Pittsburgh medical school and is certified in both family practice and emergency medicine.

Originally from Lancaster County, Wilhelm moved to Fayette County in 1984, where she served as head of Highlands Hospital's emergency room until 1992. She is married to Dr. Frank Perrone.

Wilhelm has completed a series of three romantic adventure novels set in medieval times, but has not yet found a publisher. She shopped "Murder Makes the Rounds" for two years.

"Publishing is tough. Most people have a catalog of unpublished books by the time their 'first' book is published," she said.

"I was president of the medical staff at Highlands Hospital and I decided to write something more contemporary. I didn't see myself as a mystery author, but I love puzzles."

Her former position as director of emergency medicine at Highlands Hospital helped to inspire the novel's background.

"It was when Highlands and Frick were merging and then weren't merging, but the novel is entirely fictional. I took pieces of different people to create pieces of the different characters."

Wilhelm worked on the novel for about a year. "It involved putting pieces of the puzzle together. I experienced a number of 'aha' moments. Those are very satisfying. You never can predict how things are going to go."

Wilhelm practices from two offices, in Farmington and in Lemont Furnace, but finds time to write.

"Everyone has something they like to do when they get home," she said. "With writing, if you get into it, it makes you do it. The plot moves along, the characters move along. I outline a plan, but the story, the characters, they get more sides to them. People aren't all good or all bad. Characters have to seem real.

"I also like to have a little element of humor. The novel is serious, but there are some lighter moments."

The novel also deals with a serious issue that affects both patients and doctors: managed care. Health maintenance organizations have replaced most traditional insurance plans and can keep patients from receiving care they need.

"I get on a tiny soap box, but it's primarily a good read. It's escapism," Wilhelm said.

She is working on a second mystery set in Green Valley, featuring several characters she introduced in "Murder Makes the Rounds."

Her first novel should be released in a few weeks.

© Tribune-Review Publishing Co. 2007.







Physician ventures into field of fiction books

By Jackie Beranek
Herald-Standard
Monday, April 2, 2007


FARMINGTON - Dr. Barbara Wilhelm has always loved to write and has a profound interest in emergency room medicine, mysteries and crime scene investigation through experience, television shows, books and movies.

She is a full-time practicing Fayette County physician who recently added author to her prestigious resume. Wilhelm, who obtained her B.S. and M.D. degrees in Pittsburgh where she also completed her residency in family practice, has attained board certification in both family practice and emergency medicine.

She served eight years as director of emergency medicine and terms as president of the Fayette County Medical Society and the Highlands Hospital medical staff.

In her book, "Murder Makes the Rounds," Dr. David Hunter, medical staff president at fictitious Green Valley Memorial Hospital faces the challenge of keeping his community hospital open as an independent entity in the face of managed care pressures and the encroachment of University Medical Center (UMC), seeking to expand its growing empire.

Wilhelm said, "While the medical facts in the book are correct for the time period portrayed, this is a work of fiction. Any resemblance to any persons, living or dead, or to any specific health providers, is purely coincidental."

Wilhelm said there is a love interest in the book between Hunter and Dr. Janis Saunders, chief of pathology.

"Dr. Janis Saunders and Dr. Hunter are confirmed singles who develop a comfortable relationship as they try to untangle a deadly web of hospital politics and ruthless ambition," said Wilhelm.

"Investigating the sudden deaths of two trustees, Dr. Hunter also discovers more personal secrets and not until after he can explain the two unusual deaths does he uncover the most important secret of all: love."

Wilhelm, who wrote the book under her late great-grandmother's name, Mela Barrows Bennett, said the book is a "thrilling mystery with a steamy romance" that untangles a deadly web of politics and ambition that is trying to destroy the hospital.

She also said that she got some of the inspiration for the book when she was on the medical executive committee at Highlands Hospital.

"A number of years ago we went through quite a time of sort of being associated with several different facilities and trying various other things rather than just being independent," she said. "That's where I got some of the ideas for this book."

Wilhelm, who has been a doctor since 1982, said after spending eight years as director of the emergency department at Highlands and another eight years part-time in the emergency room, she decided it was time to ease into private practice.

"You know there are only so many hours in a day and although I like emergency room work I finally had to make the decision to leave because my practice was getting very busy," she said.

Wilhelm said she has always been interested in writing and has done some creative writing at different times in her life. She additionally said she worked on the newspaper in high school and in college and was chief editor of her college newspaper one year.

"I always thought that I would write a novel someday and I had a few ideas tucked here and there on what I might write," she said. "However, I never quite got around to it until about 10 years ago when I was getting ready for a college reunion and I had an idea for something silly that I was working on for the reunion."

Wilhelm said she was originally going to write a medieval book when she got the idea for a medical story instead.

"When you are trying to publish you never know what is going to catch the publisher's attention," she said. "It's like getting your first job because publishers want to know what you have had published and, of course, it's nothing."

Wilhelm said she was also working on a historical adventure romance novel when "Murder Makes the Rounds" got published. The book took her about six months to write but she said she sat on it for some time while she made revisions.

"All in all, I reworked parts of the book for well over a year," she continued. "I also wanted to have some trusted people read it before I finally submitted it to the Pittsburgh publisher."

Wilhelm said she learned a long time ago to write tight so by the time the publishing house received her manuscript they were pretty happy with the finished version.

Wilhelm said she used her great-grandmother's name because she thought it was a great author name. She also said that she didn't want to write the book under her name because she didn't want people to get the wrong idea that the book was autobiographical.

"This is not an autobiography in any way, shape or form," she said. "I absolutely didn't want anyone to get the idea that it was autobiographical because of my medical background. The medical facts in the book are real but the book is totally fictional. The book does not depict anyone in my life. I simply took a lot of spices and threw them in a pot and this is what I came up with."

Wilhelm said she remembers her grandmother telling her that she reminded her of her mother Mela Barrows Bennett and that was another reason she decided to use her name. She said her friends and family have been very supportive and her sister served as proofreader on the project. Wilhelm's husband, Dr. Frank Perrone, who also specializes in family medicine, is on staff at Uniontown Hospital.

Wilhelm is working on a sequel to the story.

"I have the entire basic idea finished but I still have a lot of work to complete before the book is finished," she said. "The two main doctors will return but there will be new characters added."

Wilhelm said she loves medicine and writing and is pleased that her book has been so well received.

"This is a bonus because I love to write," she said. "I have found that when you write a story you don't always know where it is going to go. It's a lot of work but it is just so much fun because in some ways a story almost writes itself. I find writing to be very therapeutical."

Wilhelm's book is available through SterlingHouse Publisher Inc. at 1-888-542-BOOK or online at www.pembertonmysteries.com.


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